Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Setting from Secret of Bees

The store p.61

-The store was at the edge of town.
-It looked about hundred years old.
-The store stood out.
-Up close the store looked much older.
-It had lots of announcements.

She discribes the store with detail. When she talks about it helps me visualize what she's talking about. She's pretty good at giving details so the reader can kinda get in idea about what she is discrbing. I think she is a good writer especially because she helps the reader understand about what she is talking about by giving good visualizing details about what she wrote.

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